PREPERATION:
Where, when and why did this happen? In Banyoles, yestarday, Because a car crossing road.
What time exactly did the incident begin? at five o'clock.
What happened firs? a woman was walking in the street
How did people react? What were they doing? They running to keep the woman. They phone to a hospital.
What happened later? Came a ambulance
What happened in the end? the man died
What did people say? they said that the cars have to go more slowly.
WRITING
This was the dramatic scene yesterday in the center of Banyoles. One man was run over on the street when she was walking to go to shopping some food.
The incident began at five o'clock. The man who was driving the car, stopped suddenly while the woman was talking on her mobile phone. As soon as the ambulance come to take the victim.
At first there was complete panic. People were screaming! Then, the doctors said that Francisca, the victim, was grave! Finally the ambulance went to the hospital.
After three hours, the woman died. The man who was driving the car feelling very horrbile because he drive the car very faster because he had to keep her children back the school...
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